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You have made so big progress in Chinese！【And what really surprised me is your perfect handwriting.】 评价：正确的句子，含义略单调修改：You really improve a lot in your Grammar【完成时！】， sentence structures and language applying. I'm sure you will make bigger progress in future.评价：时态不对，内容可以修改：【新段】 【However】 Your letter【also】 has some mistakes.评价：转折连词在哪里！这很关键，段与段，句子与句子之间一定得有联系.内容不能显得太突兀.修改：You wrote some Chinese characters in a wrong way.评价：怪怪的修改：You made a few mistakes. Some Chinese characters you used is not proper.I think (practicing writing them and reading Chinese books)【reading and writing】 are good ways to correct writing errors.评价：总体还行，有点罗嗦修改：Also, there are some sentences which are hard to understand.评价：语态错！被动修改：be understoodListening to Chinese broadcasting, and watching Chinese movies【also】 can help you experience authentic Chinese life. As for grammar, there is also some (grammar) mistakes.评价：啊哈哈哈中文有语法？修改：Grammar of Chinese language is not that difficult.评价：我承认修改：I think you'll soon correct them after paying efforts. 评价：不要老用think ,suppose consider什么的都可以的.句子很好修改：【新段】 I am attaching an English travel note to this email. Looking forward to your reply.评价：乱错，时态&没完成题目要求的作文内容修改：An english travel note is attached behind the letter, and what I need is your precious comment.总评：首先题目要求内容必须完成.内容还可以充实，连接词加强，过渡加强.用词可以再好些.。

2.2019高考英语满分作文

2018·全国Ⅰ卷 假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。

请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 到达时间； 2. 合适的礼物； 3. 餐桌礼仪。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【满分范文】 Dear Terry, How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend's home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details. To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you'd better bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What's more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food. Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 2018 · 全国Ⅱ卷 你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括： 1. 短片内容：学校的发展； 2. 放映时间、地点； 3. 欢迎对短片提出意见。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【满分范文】 Notice In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it. To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. What's more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part (participate) in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments. The Student UnionJune 2018 · 全国III卷 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括： 1. 学校的体育场馆； 2. 主要的运动项目； 3. 你喜欢的项目。

注意： 1. 词数100左右： 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【满分范文】 Dear Peter, I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch. To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I'm intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life. All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself. Yours, Li Hua 2018 · 北京卷 · 第一节 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。

他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示欢迎； 2. 推荐他上哪所大学； 3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。

注意：1. 词数不少于50; 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分范文】 Dear Jim, I'm so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing. Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment. I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it's my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know. Yours, Li Hua 2018 · 北京卷 · 第二节 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你们上周接待外国学生，带领他们体验中国茶文化的全过程。

注意：词数不少于60。 【满分范文】 Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experi。

3.30篇各地的高考英语作文

书面表达

—个英文网站面向中学生征稿请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。

1. 写作要点：它是中国的传统节日之一；

2. 家人团聚；

3. 赏月、吃月饼；

4. 还有旅游、访友等其他活动。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语已为你写好，不计人总词数。

参考词汇：中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar

赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake

【参考范文】

The Mid-Autumn Festival

The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends。

4.关于填报高考志愿的英语作文

[关于填报高考志愿的英语作文]关于填报高考志愿的英语作文 为了指导你校高三年级近1000毕业生填报志愿，你校学生会对上一年度毕业生填报志愿的情况做了一次调查，调查结果如下：人数结果理由50%的毕业生听从老师的建议了解自己的学习情况和兴趣特长35%的毕业生听从父母的安排相信父母的决定，习惯听从父母的安排10%的毕业生自主选择最了解自己的优势；选择志愿是自己的权利，希望得到老师和家长的尊重5%的毕业生看情况会根据最后公布的成绩和排名来定 参考词汇：填报志愿 fill applications for the college entrance examinations[写作内容]根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容：1.调查的目的及对象：2.调查的人数、结果和各自的理由，关于填报高考志愿的英语作文，作文素材《关于填报高考志愿的英语作文》.[写作要求]只能用5个句子表达全部内容.[评分标准]句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯.参考答案：In order to provide a good guidance and reference for nearly 1000 senior high graduates in our school,the Student Union made a survey on the filling applications for the college entrance examinations among the previous year graduates.According to the statistics of the survey,half of the graduates accepted their teachers' suggestions for the reason that teachers have a better understanding of their interests,specialties and schooling experiences.35% of the graduates followed their parents advice as they are used to obeying their arrangements and trusted their decision.10% of the graduates preferred to make an independent choice as they hold that nobody know them better than themselves and since it is their rights to fill applications they hope to win respect from teachers and parents.The remaining 5% just made their choices accordingly after they got the results of the final published scores and ranking.《关于填报高考志愿的英语作文》 〔关于填报高考志愿的英语作文〕【征服畏惧、建立自信的最快最确实的方法，就是去做你害怕的事，直到你获得成功的经验.】。

5.高考的英语作文的范文

我一一罗列了近五年的四川卷，从最近的到06年的，都是先题目，再范文。

首先是2010年的 假定你校将举行一个成人仪式，你将作为代表在仪式上发言。请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿。

1.过去对成年的向往； 2.现在的感受和认识； 3.将来的目标及措施。 参考词汇：责任 responsibility 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3.发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数） One possible version: Good morning, everyone ! The topic of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.” As a child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked. Now I'm a grown-up, but I find things do not go as I expected. Although I can enjoy more freedom, at the same time I realize that being a grown-up not only means this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful. To reach the goal, I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university.(106words) Thank you for your listening. 再来是2009年的 假设你是李华。

你的外国笔友Jane 打算于七月来中国，特来信了解中国的社交习俗。 请你用英语回一封信，从以下几个方面作具体介绍。

1.见面时的问候方式； 2.对赞美的回答方或； 3.接收礼物时的回应方式； 4.餐宴礼节。 注意： 1.词数100左右，信的开头和结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Dear Jane, Glad to hear from you and you're welcome to China July. I hope what's mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 范文 Dear Jane, Glad to hear from you and you're welcome to China in July.The following are some Chinese customs. Firstly,we greet each other by saying“Hello”or asking such questions as “Where are you going?”or “Are you busy?”to express our care.Secondly,when praised,we reply with “Oh,no!”or“I'm over­praised” to show good manners.Next,when receiving a gift,we usually say “It's unnecessary” besides“Thanks”to show politeness and then put it away.Finally,at dinner parties,we talk loudly and touch glasses when drinking to someone's health or success to show that we're warm. Anyhow,different cultures,different customs.If you“Do as the Romans do when in Rome”,you'll enjoy more of your stay here. I hope what's mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 接下来是2008年的作文 你校学生会准备办一期英语墙报，主题为：保护环境从我做起。

请你根据下图所示写一篇英语短文。 注意：1. 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

What can I do for our environment?Everyone can do something for our environment. 【内容要点】1、离开教室要关灯，节约用电；2、节约用纸，保护森林；3、不用纸杯和筷子 4、自己根据实际情况可添加一些与保护环境有关的细节 One Possible Version: What can I do for environment? Everyone can do something for our environment. For me, I should try to save electricity in my daily life. For example, if I am the last person to leave the classroom in the evening, I will always remember to turn off the lights. In order to protect our forests, I will use paper wisely. I should try to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible. I will not use things like paper cups and disposable chopsticks because they are made of wood. I believe that doing all these small thins will improve our environment and help make our world better to live in.接下来是2007年的 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Henry 最近来信，询问你高考后的暑期安排。请胸根据以下要点，用英语回一封信，说明你的计划，并简述理由。

1.休息； 2.读书； 3.陪伴父母； 4.参加社会活动；注意：1.词数100左右，信的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入总词数）； 2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3.参考词汇：高考——college entrance examination社会活动——social activitiesDear Henry, I'm glad to receive your letter. 。

. Best wishes!Li Hua 范文 I'm glad to receive your letter. It's a pleasure for me to tell you my plan of this coming summer vacation after the college entrance examination. First of all, a good rest is needed because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years. Of course, I'll do some reading for fun, and for knowledge as well. I'll spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework. They've done so much for me, you know. If possible, I'll take part in some social activities so that I can know more about the society.Best wishes!Li Hua 最后是。

6.求高考英语作文范文10篇

Passage 1(09？？福建)某英语报社拟成立“微笑俱乐部”，现向癸未征募会员。

要求申请者提交一篇题为“I want to Smile”的英语短文。请你以申请者的身份，根据以下思路图的提示用英语写一篇短文。

注意： 1. 根据思路图适当展开，以使行文连贯； 2. 词数：120左右 I Want to Smile【参考范文】I Want to SmileThere are many advantages of smiling. It can not only make us happy, but also please others. If we smile at life, life will smile on us in return. So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible, First, I would like to smile at my parents because they have given me life and take all the trouble to bring me up. They arrange almost everything for me. With their help, I have made great progress. I would like to say “Thank you” to them with a smile. Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life. In a word, let's greet every day with a smile. Tomorrow is another day. Passage 2(09？？江苏)鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。

但是，过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文。

鼠标的必要性 对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪……鼠标的便捷性 点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除…… 编辑文本，搜索信息…… 收发邮件，选购商品…… 点播音乐，下载电影……如果过分依赖鼠标…… （请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点）注意：1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2.词数150左右。

开头已经写好，不计人总词数。3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.【参考范文】The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.For most people, it's almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn't always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.(153 words)Passage 3 (08？？湖南)请从下列人物中选择你最喜欢的一位，用英语写一篇120词左右的短文。要求根据所给信息作适当发挥，且需包括以下三部分内容：1.对该人物的简单介绍；2.喜欢该人物的理由；3.从该人物身上得到的启示。

Thomas Edison Helen Keller William Shakespeareinventor;creative;diligent;full of wisdom ordinary but great woman;disabled;optimistic;eager to learn writer;talented;imaginative;man of all ages“Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.” “。if I had the power of sight for three days.” “Life is a stage。”

【参考范文】Sample 1:Thomas EdisonBorn in America, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor. He was once thought to be a boy who was not worth educating. In fact, he was a man full of imagination.I admire Edison a lot because of his great contribution to the world. He had more than 1,000 inventions. In his lifetime, he was always eager to know how things worked, which helped him to earn the nickname“the Wizard of Melo Park”.He was also so diligent that he worked day and night. And this explained why he had so many great inventions.What impresses me most is his famous saying,“Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.”Probably I cannot be an Edison myself, but I can be a hard-working learner. From him, I realize the secret to success is not when or where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life.Sample 2:Helen KellerEvery time I read“。if I had the power of sight for three days”,I cannot help being moved by its author Helen Keller, an ordinary but great American woman.I admire Helen because she is optimistic about life. She became deaf and blind when she was 19 months old. Since then she lived in a world of darkness and silence, and communication seemed only a dream for her. But she never gave up and struggled to lead an active life. Under the guidance of her teacher, Ms. Sullivan, Helen learned to read and write and became a famous w。

7.高中英语作文

Dear Students,The XXX High School Storytelling Contest will be held in conjunction at School Hall.Goal: Using Storytelling Technique to Improve Speaking Skills, variety and de-stress of school life. A storytelling that equips, motivates and inspires the studentsto create/re-create effective and influential stories.Language: English only.Date: 15, Mar, 2017, 9:00-11:30, 14:00-16:30.Time: 3.30-4.00 minutes.Contestant: Storytelling choosen in class.The judges: English School Teachers.First-Prize Winner: Certificate Of Merit and a 10 days of XXX English Camp in Summer School Holiday.Second - Prize Winner: Certificate Of Merit and a set of Oxford Dictionary.Third - Prize Winner: Certificate Of Merit and a Chinese - English Dictionary.Submission period:Contestants can submit entries as of January 9, 2017, at 10:00, until the contest closes on January 31, 2017, at 17:00.If you have any enquiries, please feel free to contact us.Email: xxxxx@xxxxx.comContact No: 138xxxx xxxxKind regardsXXXPresident of the Student Union。

8.高考英语作文高分模版有哪些

英语书信的常见写作模板 开头部分： How nice to hear from you again。

Let me tell you something about the activity。 I'm glad to have received your letter of Apr。

9th。 I'm pleased to hear that you're coming to China for a visit。

I'm writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America。 结尾部分： With best wishes。

I'm looking forward to your reply。 I'd appreciate it if you could reply earlier。

口头通知常见写作模板 开场白部分： Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make。 正文部分： All the teachers and students are required to attend it。

Please take your notebooks and make notes。 Please listen carefully and we'll have a discussion in groups。

Please come on time and don't be late。 结束语部分： Please come and join in it。

Everybody is welcome to attend it。 I hope you'll have a nice time here。

That's all。 Thank you。

9.2016高考英语作文范文翻译

Dear mother,How's everything going at home I miss you and dad very much.I am pretty good in school, so you and dad do not have to worry about me. I am a senior student in high school so that I am busy with my study all the time. I work hard to prepare the college entrance examination and I think I do a great job now. Teachers care much about me and when I have problems, I always ask them. They encourage me very often, considering that I can go to the university I dream of. Of course, I take good care of myself in life. I build good relationships with my friends and classmates, which makes me happy to be with them.Please take good care of yourselves at home. I love you.Truly yours,Christina亲爱的妈妈：家里一切都好吗？我很想念您和爸爸。

我在学校很好，所以你们不用担心我。我现在是高三的学生了，因此我一直忙于学习，努力准备高考。

我想我现在的状态很好。老师们很关心我，我遇到问题的时候，都会积极地向老师提问。

他们会常常鼓励我，对我也有信心，认为我能考上我理想中的学校。当然，在生活上我也能很好地照顾自己。

我和朋友以及同学关系很好，和他们一起学习生活，我很快乐。在家里请你和爸爸照顾好自己，我爱你们。

您亲爱的克里斯蒂娜美丽的时光 The Most Beautiful Time Now, I am a senior student in high school, who worked so hard in the past two years. As we all know, the study burden of high school students in China is heavy. Therefore, we spend most of our time in study and we have little time to have fun. However, I still consider the days in high school are the greatest, because I develop my strong will, improve my comprehensive abilities and make good friends in high school. In daily life, I meet many problems in life and study, but I overcome them all. In the process, I get improvement. In addition, I develop deep relationships with my classmates while we study together. We help each other and make progress together. We share our happiness and sorrows and support each other. There is an old saying that a friend in need is a friend indeed. It's the support and sharing that make the days cherished.现在我是一名高三的学生，在过去的两年里我很努力地学习，因为众所周知的，在中国中学生的学习负担非常重。因此，我们花费大部分的时间在学习上，玩乐的时间却很少。

然而，我始终认为高中是我最美的时光，因为在高中的两年里，我培养了坚强的意志，提高了自身的综合能力，更重要的是，我交到了许多朋友。平时，在生活和学习中我都遇到了许多问题，但我都克服了，在这个过程中，我得到了提高和进步。

此外，在平时的学习生活中我也与同学们建立了深厚的感情。我们互相帮助，共同进步，也一起分享喜怒哀乐，互相支持。

患难见真情，正是这份互相支持一起分享的感情使高中的时光变得弥足珍贵。