雅思作文修改

The graph describes THE changes in THE average HOUSE prices in various cities around the world from 1990 to 2002, comparING TO the average house prices FOR THOSE CITIES in 1989.

First of all, BOTH OF THE average house prices in Tokyo and London declined dramatically between 1990 and 1995 BY 7 PERCENT.In addition, THE prices in New York also decreased BY 5 PERCENT.However,THE average house prices in Madrid and Frankfurt increased INSIGNIFICANTLY BY 2% and 3% respectively.

During THE 7 years from 1996 to 2002, THE average house prices in London showed A RISE OF a significantly upward trend, WHICH INCREASED BY 12% FROM THE PRICES in 1989.It is also noticeable that prices in New York and Madrid went up BY 5% and 4% respectively.MOREOVER, THE prices in Frankfurt climbed slightly.Nonetheless,prices in Tokyo fell BY 5%.

In a nutshell, THE HOUSE prices WAS INCREASING IN ALL OTHER CITIES, yet THE HOUSE price in Tokyo WAS DECREASING.

although和yet不能同时出现。

求高手点评雅思“小作文”（剑7 Test2 Task1 ）

感觉还不错啊~词语和句式较为多变，介词用得也准确，数据抓取得也合理。

表达年份时，可以有多种方式，除了直接写年份的数字，也可以说the year of 2004,the 2004 year等；表示“从图中看出”这个意思，还可以用from the graph,we can see。xxx is shown(illustated, outlined。

)from the tableit could be easily seen that 。多背几个，等你一想表达这个意思时，可以随时调用。

总结段一般还是必要的，加上会显得比较完整。写小作文可以写得很精彩，但是主要还是能把图描述准确，不要每句看起来都是一种结构，总之多背些句式是好的，到最后写起来会得心应手。

剑桥雅思7 问题

1 大小写可以根据上下文看 比如上文都是开头大写 后面就继续保持大写

专有名词肯定是大写的

有人说 所有字母都大写绝对不会错 但是我觉得还是看情况自己拿捏的好

2 3 对于是否连写 这个不好说 不过Q2中公司名是专有名词 2个单词开头大写最好不过了 Q3中Newtown本来就是连写在一起的

PS 2 3不是很确定 最好问问专业人士

4 建议用阿拉伯数字 免得单词拼写错了倒扣分 PS 应该是7 screens吧

5 这个语境不记得了 看上下文吧 如果是前面表示复数 就加S

剑桥雅思七阅读test2的18~22题

18题在b段5行 说一堆鸟在BRITAIN 什么skylark 之类的 都vanished了

19题 根本没提口感这东西

20题 c段第一句，说大家不会吧这些环境危害联系到我们的食物上，之后5句又说这些花费不是以钱的形式出现的 而是一种美学形式 所以肯定是no

21e段6句提到 food poisining 食物中毒 和题那个illness 对应

22 在e段7句 pretty 说我们的 food bill 其实使我们想象的threefold（三倍）对题中的higher