高中英语作文

你的作文总体意思表达了出来，但还是有些不足：1.重复词太多。

词语运用得好可以给作文生色不少，而英语单词更不能整天重复。在文中，有些单词重复率有些高，如help,think.可用其他同义词代替，如assist,consider，或书本词（这很重要）2.表达较为中式。

你的文章中有一部分句子很生硬，是直接翻译其字面意思，如They think they can have a good look at the beautiful sights of nature.这句子可参照范文学习。3.句子太长。

你现在是高一，可能还对长句使用不太清楚。对于作文来讲，最好是长短句结合。

过多的长句会使改卷老师疲惫。所以句子不求长，而是求精且准。

你的文章长句过多，这使你的文章显得不高级，反而啰嗦。如What's more, spring outing can open up their eyes to the outside world, which helps combine the knowledeg they've learned at school with the real situations. 这个句子太长了，显得啰嗦。

这可参照范文（够简洁）4.句式单一。你的文章的句式变化少，一般都是用it ,which从句。

可改为用ing/ed开头的句子而你的文章有一个亮点，就是连接词颇丰富！这点应继续保持！。

有谁能给我推荐一本关于写英语论文的书

『附上几本，新华书店都有，不是网购的话，就要看经营点大不大，书目齐不齐了』

书名：英语论文写作教程：基于国际标准的学术写作与发表

出版社：清华大学出版社

作者：戴福林Devlin著

出版日期：2003-01-01

简介：

本书是一本高级英语学术写作教程。作者在较短的篇幅里融会了国际通用的写作标准与分析，简明扼要地介绍了如何在国际标准的框架下写作论文并发表。

本书作者BrianDevlin是澳大利亚NorthernTerritoryUniversity大学的副教授，在美国哥伦比亚大学获得博士学位，具有较好的国际学术背景。本书的基础是Devlin博士在作为英语专家在清华大学外语系讲授“英语论文写作”课程期间的讲义。

本书适合做英语专业研究生或本科生论文写作的教材，也可以作为其他专业硕士或博士研究生的英文写作参考书。

书名：E英语论文写作

作者：石坚//帅培天

出版社：四川人民出版社

出版日期：2005-5-1

简介：

从事高校英语写作教学及研究多年，一直心仪能有一整套供师生从低年级到高年级使用的写作教材。这套教材应包括基础英语写作、英语应用文写作和高级阶段的英语论文写作。作为基础阶段的教材，应从句子到段落，再到篇章，帮助学生打下坚实的英文写作基础；应用文写作则为增强学生应用英语进行交际的能力添砖加瓦；论文写作应从普通论文讲起，再到学术论文，初步培养学生从事学术研究，撰写学术文章的能力。

《英语论文写作》正是这种创作冲动的产物。本书的主要对象是大学本科高年级学生，对其他英文学习和工作者而言，不乏为一部指导性的专著。这部专著/教材除努力体现上述愿望外，有以下几个特点：

1、全书用第一人称写成，充分体现了人文精神，让使用者以平等的身份参与问题的讨论，增强写作道地英语论文的自信心。

2、一些写作理论和技巧，从课文阐述转到了练习之中，从而减轻了说教式的讲解带给读者的枯燥感；同时，读者通过练习去探索，提取某种理论或技巧，会兴致勃勃，因为接下来的是一种成就感。

3、在学会使用图书馆的章节里，直接用计算机时代美国先进的图书馆为例，给读者树立了一个很高的目标，这一点，相信每位科研工作者或准备从事科研者都不会有异议。

书名：英语专业毕业论文写作指南

出版社：武汉大学

作者：陈春莲

出版日期：2007-01-01

简介：

随着我国与国外的交往越来越频繁，越来越多的学者和科技工作者希望百己的学术文章和科研成果能够在国际刊物上发表或是在国际会议上宣读，而在校的大学生中，英语专业的学生必须用英语撰写毕业论文。怎样才能使用英语撰写的论文符合国际标准？本书作者根据多年指导英语专业本科生和研究生的毕业论文的经验，参照MLA（美国现代语言协会）所颁布的英语论文写作规范，编写了这本《英语专业毕业论文写作指南》，相信对广大用英语撰写论文的人会有所帮助。本书分为三大部分：论文写作计划、论文撰写格式、论文范文。

本书适用于英语专业的大专生、继续教育生、本科生和研究生以及用英语撰写学术论文的科研人员。

英语论文范文

How to improve your English in full detail (my experience) The Third EditionTo be good at English is not particularly easy but not terribly hard either.Before you start to learn sentences, or new words, the first and also the most important step is the "pronunciation". To pronounce perfectly you should buy a tape to assist you to learn and practise. This is the fundamental step to learn English, ignore or pay no attention to this step; you will not learn proper English and you will find the later steps more and more difficult. If you are solid and accurate in pronunciation, you will find the later steps much easier and you will stand firmly on the right track.After mastering the pronunciation perfectly, it is the time to accumulate new words and useful expressions. Of course start from the simplest words like “hello, hi, you, me, he, him, his, her”, etc。

. and expressions like “how are you, how old are you, how do you do”, etc。

。. It is essential to write the words on a piece of paper so that you remember them well. Actually everyone had done these at his/her primary school.*************Now let me tell you how I learnt English in China. *******************Speaking:In China, you won't have enough chances to speak English. What I did was in the morning I got up early and read aloud the texts in the textbooks. The initial aim was to achieve the same speed as the tape, and then being able to read aloud the texts with the same style as the English announcer in the tape. By doing this, it helps you to consolidate your pronunciation and grammar.Listening:Nowadays it is much easier to learn English in China because you can watch some TV channels in English. The more channels in English the better because you can choose your preferred programmes and it helps you to learn English with interests of your own, hence ideal for listening and expression/words accumulations.Writing:It is also very useful to write diaries. On writing diaries, it is not useful if you just write it without the care of grammar and spelling. When you finish you should always read your diaries again to check for errors and refine your sentences (e.g. remove repetitive words, use better expressions, and sort out the structure of the sentences).Reading:It is also very important to read story books in English, starting from thin ones with not many new words. Read as many thin books as you possibly can. Little by Little you will want to read thicker books, and your reading ability will get even better.Putting four elements together:I have to emphasise that when you do all these reading, listening, writing and speaking; you should join them together as a whole, apply the new words you learn from watching TV, reading books to your writing and speaking.The enhancement of learning comes from getting hold of the possible opportunities to speak English (in China or abroad):In China, you should try to go to local English corner to practise your oral English. If you are abroad then you should make a lot of English or international friends so you always have the opportunity to speak English.On Spoken English, attitude is very important. You need to be very keen and you must not be shy. Never be afraid to make mistakes. Always think that a talk in English with some one will help you significantly.You can think in this way: since my parents have paid so much to support me to study abroad, the money is partly spent on the international environment for learning English; therefore I ought to try my best to take every opportunity to practise my English. My English has risen to a higher level in the last 2 years, because I talk in English most of the time. Having some international friends is particularly useful indeed. Summing up the activities:I have also been watching TV too. The real improvement lies in staying with international friends long enough and watching a lot of TV such as news, football, dramas, documentaries etc。

. Writing diaries also helps me to remember good words, good expressions and practise sentence structuring.*****Now, I have finished talking about how to learn and improve General English.It is the time to switch to "Your Major in English" *******************************Knowing general English on its own is not going to be sufficient for most people. Skills are as important as mastering another language. General English helps people to communicate with each other in their lives. Technical English helps you to take on challenges to change the world for the highest, to earn money for your living for the lower.Some people who have a degree in English go abroad to learn something different but heavily based on the language such as Media s。

我现在大四英语专业,要写毕业论文,怎么选题

我也是本科英语专业的刚刚毕业。

但没涉及到国际政治专业， 我给你的建议你参考参考。英语专业比较常见但是也比较容易通过的就是对文献或者电视媒体的研究。

文献研究，深刻点的比如有人研究的《简爱》中的女性主义，还有实用的对文章用词，语法习惯的研究。对电视媒体的研究集中在电视剧，电影和综艺节目。

这类题材比较好取材，比如英语电影中的英雄主义，女性权利等等。但是不建议去大范围的写，建议针对一个片子探讨。

我的毕业论文是对电影《刮痧》的文化对比，集中在对待妇女儿童方面中美理念和法律上的不同进行的研究。希望能给你带来一点帮助，也祝你毕业顺利~。

高中议论文范文800字

我们忘却的艰辛 （全国卷1）时代是一棵树，过去是汲取营养的根，现在是地表上那一片丰茂与硕果累累。

我们嘲笑父辈，说他们在有鱼吃的年代还捉老鼠；在小康社会的今天还捡饭桌上的一粒米；在粮食充裕的时候还舍不得倒掉一碗馊了的菜。在我们的嘲笑中，他们含泪。

我们嘲笑父辈，说他们在花甲的年纪都不懂得休憩；在烈日的炙烤下不懂得乘荫纳凉；在儿女已长大的年纪还释不开心怀。在我们的嘲笑中，他们傻笑。

我们嘲笑父辈，说他们穿着老土的衣服显朴素；在城里的餐桌上依然吃得一粒不剩；在买菜时拿着皱巴巴的钱讨2毛钱的价。在我们的嘲笑中，他们执着着。

当有一天，我们捉襟见肘了，他一声不吭地拿出那些曾被我们鄙视的节俭替我们解了围。 他们傻笑着，我们哭了。

我们忆起了那些我们忘却的艰辛，那些在田野中抚着枯死的幼苗叹息的时光。我们也终于懂得了父辈们放心不下的原因。

他们都曾是面朝黄土背朝天的农民，只是用自己的辛酸晓谕我们那不能忘却的艰辛。 他们用辛劳铸就了我们勤劳民族的智慧，用智慧浇灌了一方硕果累累的沃土。

在崛起的东方大地上，我们是太阳，让这智慧之花常开不败的太阳。//用心筑起巢的父辈在用心教会我们成长。

我们需要继承与发扬那一轮光辉。//沧海桑田，无法预知的事情，父辈是用勤劳赢取了幸福。

//时光流转，幸福连绵，父辈是用甘甜苦涩延续了幸福。//锦江春色，幸福蔓延，父辈在用俭朴唤起那忘却的艰辛。

朴实的父辈平实的话只告诉我们：忧劳可以兴国，逸豫可以亡身；一个民族，忘记了历史，就意味着背叛，忘记了艰辛，就意味着衰落。 在有鱼吃的年代，我们不忘我们曾是一群捕鼠的人。

在繁茂的树荫里，我们会成为汲取营养的根。 向不合理的规则说不 今年3月，在国人的一片反对声中，佳士得拍卖行将从圆明园盗取的兔首、鼠首铜像进行拍卖。

华人蔡铭超高价拍下这两件文物，但事后拒绝付款，造成流拍，引起舆论的一片哗然。有人称他为民族英雄，有人认为他恶意破坏规则，而我认为，他只是作为一名炎黄子孙，向不合理的规则说了一声震惊全球的“不”。

众所周知，兔首、鼠首以及早先的其他生肖铜像，均是英法联军洗劫圆明园时非法所得。如今，这昔日的强盗不仅没有原物璧还，还不顾中国人强烈反对进行拍卖，何异于公然销赃？蔡铭超作为一个黑头发黄皮肤的中国人，高价拍下这两件文物是出于对祖国的热忱，不愿祖国的瑰宝流入他人之手。

而事后拒绝付款，则是对不合理的拍卖规则的抗争。试想，你会花重金从强盗手中赎回自家的宝贝吗？于个人，这令人义愤填膺；于国家，这辱国辱民族。

倘若蔡铭超真的按照所谓的规则向佳士得拍卖行支付相应的款项，那在别人眼中，中国人岂不成了被打了左脸还把右脸凑上前去的任人欺凌的懦夫？所以，在蔡铭超看似无理的行为后面，其实蕴涵着成熟的思考与对不合理规则的奋力抗争。 中国自古便有“没有规矩，不成方圆”的训条，延续数千年的封建王朝更是以此礼数、规则作为约束人的条款，然而并不是所有的规则都值得不分青红皂白去遵守，否则，人就成了规则的奴隶。

昔有爱国志士为抗争丧权辱国的“二十一条”殒身不恤，今有蔡铭超高价拍得铜像后拒绝付款，这些行为，究其本质都是对不合理的规则说“不”，都是对公平公正、合理合法的人类社会基本公理的呼唤。看似无理的闹剧，破坏的是某些人心中所谓的规则，目的却是建立起真正符合真理的规则，如果说蔡铭超此举是向佳士得拍卖行及其无理规则的示威，那么我呼唤更多个蔡铭超照亮那些被不合理规则笼罩的黑暗肮脏的角落！ 古往今来，任何一次对不合理规则的抗争都不是一时的冲动与头脑发热，那些看似肆意妄为的不羁后（面）都有理性的思考。

李白咏叹“安能摧眉折腰事权贵，使我不得开心颜”，向浑浊的官场说“不”；苏轼泛舟赤壁，竹杖芒鞋，硬是以洒脱不羁向坎坷的仕途说“不”；沉郁的杜子美以“三吏”“三别”辛辣地对“猛于虎”的苛政说“不”……蔡铭超秉承这些力争，这些不羁，这种精神与豪情，向不合理的规则玩世不恭地大喊一声“不”！ 无关伟大的民族气节，无关恶意炒作，蔡铭超只是向不合理的规则说了一声“不”，向真理与公平（发出了）深情的呼唤！ 佳作点评： 原作文材料中说，有人认为蔡铭超拒不支付拍卖款是“恶意破坏规则”，而本文则是反弹琵琶，针锋相对，说蔡的行为是向不合理的规则说了一个“不”字。这就使得本文在众多人云亦云的文章中独树一帜，特别能吸引读者的眼球。

作者说，蔡的行为并非“恶意炒作”，而是出于对祖国的一腔热忱，出于对不合理规则的抗争，而这个抗争并非一时头脑发热，而是经过深思熟虑的，秉承着古代仁人志士的“这些力争，这些不羁，这种精神与豪情”。文章采用破立结合的笔法，高度评价了蔡的行为的意义。

这样写，就使得本文具有历史的深度和现实的广度，不是仅仅对蔡的行为表个态的平庸之作所能媲美的。结尾处，作者用十分精练的语言收束全文，呼应标题，照应开头，使文章结构更加完整严谨。

虽然个别措辞还欠斟酌，但本文还是被评为一类卷，获。

bec高级作文求批改Report:Profitoftwoseafoodsubsidiaryin2008and

Report:Profits of two sea food subsidiaries in 2008 and 2010This report serves to analyse the general operating situations of the European subsidiary and the Australian subsidiary in 2008 and 2010.In retrospect,the Australian subsidiary'S profits started at about 47 millions US dollars in the first quarter,and then experienced a relatively steady trend through the whole year,with a slight increase to about （多少钱数） in the second quarter.However,the European subsidiary started at 32 million US dollars in the first quarter and then reached to the peak of about 38 millions US dollars in the second,from which it declined stablely.In 2010,the Australian subsidiary had a lower starting point of about 31 millions US dollars in the first quarter,.It rised to the summit of about （多少钱）in the second and then decreased steadily from the third to the fourth quarter.As to the European subsidiary,it began at a lower point rated 20 million US dollars and then there was a sharp increase in the third before it collapsed in the fourth.In conclusion,the European subsidiary is more vibrating then the Australian subsidiary.大概看了看，觉得你写的很不错.有些地方仍需加强.第一、有些词组和词汇需要提高.比如说达到最大值、增加、减少、提高、降低等，这些常用词需要系统的记忆一下.真题后面的范文里面就有很多这样的例子，可以学学他们是怎样用词的.比如，提高可以是increase risego up improve等，不要经常用一个词，英语最避讳的就是用词重复.从你写的作文里面可以看出你对这方面有意识，这一点很好，但是仍需加强.第二、图表有些地方的表达不是很准确.看我给你改的2008年欧洲分公司的那一节，第一季度是32，第二季度是38，第三、四季度开始下滑.那么就说明第二季度是最高点，你只提到达到了38，但是没有提到它是最高峰，遗漏了一点.不仅无法展现你对这一点的英语掌握程度，还给人一种分析不透彻的感觉.不是我吹毛求疵，范文里面经常出现的一个词组就是reached to the peak of ，和go to the prime of ，二者都是达到最高点的意思.go to the minimum则是最低点的意思.所以你要好好研究研究范文.看图的时候有几个点要把握住，起点、最高点、最低点和终点，总体趋势也要说说，就是是说总体趋势是平稳的还是动荡的（总体趋势这一点你掌握的很好，值得表扬.嘿嘿.）.还有我给你标的（多少钱）的字样，意思是要把达到的数值说一下，既可以凑字，也给人一种有理有据的感觉.就像现在一样，在没有图的情况下，我只能通过数字来增加对文章的了解.第三、衔接的地方也要注意.就是in comparision ,however 等字样.当然衔接词不止这些，范文里面都有，你自己总结一下吧.记住我告诉你的这几点，拿B应该没问题.我是去年五月考的，勉强能回忆起这些.说错的地方望见谅.。

【120词英语范文】帮忙：2篇英语作文（120字以上）高二水准,2篇

第一片 Is a Taining Class o Family Teache Necessay? Moe and moe middle school students ae going to all kinds of taining classes o having family teaches at the weekend. Thee ae two diffeent viewpoints aout it. On the one hand, some think that studying following the family teaches is ette than self study. It can not only stengthen what you've leant at school, ut help you lean moe useful things as well. On the othe hand, some people who have the diffeent opinion conside it a waste of time and money, fo many taining classes and family teaches ae just woking fo money, you can not lean something eally useful thee, and thus lose the time of elaxing youselves. In my opinion, as students, we should eally know whethe we need a taining class o family teache. Fist, make sue that you need them, and they would e helpful, then choose a easonale one. Just ememe, once you stat and neve give up。

求几十个高中英语作文中常用（是常用的）的高级（是高级的）句子和

句型英语作文常用句型 一、用于驳性和比较性论文 1. In general, I don't agree with 2. In my opinion, this point of view doesn't hold water。

3. The chief reason why… is that… 4.There is no true that… 5. It is not true that… 6. It can be easily denied than… 7. We have no reason to believe that… 8. What is more serious is that… 9. But it is pity that… 10. Besides, we should not neglect that… 11. But the problem is not so simple. Therefore… 12. Others may find this to be true, but I believer that… 13. Perhaps I was question why… 14. There is a certain amount of truth in this, but we still have a problem with regard to… 15. Though we are in basic agreement with…，but 16. What seems to be the trouble is… 17. Yet differences will be found, that's why I feel that… 18. It would be reasonable to take the view that …， but it would be foolish to claim that… 19. There is in fact on reason for us so believe that… 20. What these people fail to consider is that… 21. It is one thing to insist that… ， it is quite another to show that … 22. Wonderful as A is , however, it has its own disadvantages too。 23. The advantages of B are much greater than A。

24. A's advantage sounds ridiculous when B's advantages are taken into consideration。 二、用于描写图表和数据 1. It has increased by three times as compared with that of 1998. 2. There is an increase of 20% in total this year。

3. It has been increased by a factor of 4since 1995. 4. It would be expected to increase 5 times。 5. The table shows a three times increase over that of last year。

6. It was decreased twice than that of the year 1996. 7. The total number was lowered by 10%。 8. It rose from 10-15 percent of the total this year。

9. Compared with 1997, it fell from 15 to 10 percent。 10. The number is 5 times as much as that of 1995. 11. It has decreased almost two and half times, compared with… 三、用于解释性和阐述性论说文 1.Everybody knows that… 2.It can be easily proved that… 3. It is true that… 4. No one can deny that 5. One thing which is equally important to the above mentioned is… 6. The chief reason is that… 7. We must recognize that… 8. There is on doubt that… 9. I am of the opinion that… 10. This can be expressed as follows; 11. To take …for an example… 12. We have reason to believe that 13. Now that we know that… 14. Among the most convincing reasons given, one should be mentioned… 15. The change in …largely results from the fact that 16. There are several causes for this significant growth in…，first …，second …，finally… 17. A number of factors could account for the development in… 18. Perhaps the primary reason is… 19. It is chiefly responsible of… 20. The reasons for…are complicated, And probably they are found in the fact… 21. Here are several possible reasons, excerpt that… 22. Somebody believes/argues/holds/insists/thinks that… 23. It is not simple to give the reason for this complicated phenomenon… 24. Different people observes it in different ways。

四、用于文章的开头 1. As the proverb says… 2. It goes without saying tan… 3. Generally speaking… 4. It is quite clear than because… 5. It is often said that … 6. Many people often ask such question：“…？” 7. More and more people have come to realize… 8. There is no doubt that… 9. Some people believe that… 10. These days we are often told that, but is this really the case? 11. One great man said that… 12. Recently the issue of… has been brought to public attention。 13. In the past several years there has been… 14. Now it is commonly held that… but I doubt whether… 15. Currently there is a widespread concern that… 16. Now people in growing number are coming to realize that… 17. There is a general discussion today about the issue of … 18. Faced with…， quite a few people argue that…， but other people conceive differently。

[英语作文常用句型]在英语写作中，有一些句型的搭配能力非常强，基本上可以用在各种话题的议论文中，如果能将这些句型掌握并熟练应用一定会使你的英文写作得心应手。想不想试一试呢？一、开头句型我们常说，良好的开端等于成功的一半。

做事如此，作文也是如此。所以我们颇有必要在作文的开头花一番心思。

在写议论文时，你通常以什么样的方式开头呢？最简单也最常用的可能就是开门见山法。也就是说———直截了当地提出你对这个问题的观点，点出文章的中心思想。

I。.has both advantages and disadvantages.……既有利又有弊。

例如：1.Obviously television has both advantages and disadvantages.2.Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages.3.Com pared with cars,bikes have their advantages and disadvantages.举一反三：1.Although computers bring peo。