求2006年4月22日,雅思大作文范文

People live in the present. They plan for and worry about the future. History, however, is the study of the past. Some people might ask, "Given all the demands that press in from living in the present and anticipating what is yet to come, why bother with what has been? Given all the desirable and available branches of knowledge, why insist—as most American educational programs do—on a good bit of history? And why urge many students to study even more history than they are required to?" However, its undeniable that learning about past has its value, it will help us understand people and societies, and it will help us understand change and how the society we live in came to be.History helps us understand people and societies. In the first place, history offers a storehouse of information about how people and societies behave. Understanding the operations of people and societies is difficult, though a number of disciplines make the attempt. An exclusive reliance on current data would needlessly handicap our efforts. For example, how can we evaluate war if the nation is at peace—unless we use historical materials? How can we understand genius, the influence of technological innovation, or the role that beliefs play in shaping family life, if we dont use what we know about experiences in the past? Consequently, history must serve, however imperfectly, as our laboratory, and data from the past must serve as our most vital evidence in the unavoidable quest to figure out why our complex species behaves as it does in societal settings. This, fundamentally, is why we cannot stay away from history: it offers the only extensive evidential base for the contemplation and analysis of how societies function, and people need to have some sense of how societies function simply to run their own lives.History also helps us understand change and how the society we live in came to be. The second reason history is inescapable as a subject of serious study follows closely on the first. The past causes the present, and so the future. Any time we try to know why something happened—whether a shift in political party dominance in the American Congress, a major change in the teenage suicide rate, or a war in the Balkans or the Middle East—we have to look for factors that took shape earlier. Sometimes fairly recent history will suffice to explain a major development, but often we need to look further back to identify the causes of change. only through studying history can we grasp how things change; only through history can we begin to comprehend the factors that cause change; and only through history can we understand what elements of an institution or a society persist despite change.。

这是我的第一篇雅思练习作文,希望大家帮我修改,谢谢题目：8分万

This bar chart illustrates the percentage of people who receive high level education in China from 1990 to 2004. Clearly, the proportion of people receiving tertiary education shows an upward trend. (It is 。

.这种句型少用 在IELTS还好 如果是在sat的写作中 或是 国外大学的写作中 这种句式会被视为redundant and vague 但是有一些词是必须用的 比如说 It is incumbent upon。., etc)According to the graph, the number of students enrolled in higher education slightly increased from 1990(about 4%) to 1994 (approximately 11%) in China. What is more, this figure doubled during the next two years, arriving at rougly 22%. From 1996 onwards, substantial increasei is noticed in the number of Chinese students studied in tertiary education, amounting to approximately 10% (between the years from 1996 to 1998 and to 2000 respectively) 括号中的话有问题 因为没有图 我不知道具体情况是什么样的 但是语法上是肯定错的，confusing~. In adiition, the number of Chinese students who took high leverl education ascended precipitously from 45% 65% between 2000 and 2002, a figure which rose to almost 70%.Therefore, it can be clearly seen from the bar diagram that the numbers in higher education in China has a dramatical rise between 1990 and 2004. (wordy。

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雅思作文 万能模版！！！？？？

2011雅思小作文写作万能模板 1、通过第一个曲线图，我们可以知道____，也说明了结果是___ According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________. 2、一张有趣、有教育意义的、（内容）的图片（这句模板在雅思小作文中的应用非常的广泛。）

There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: __________. 3、当前有一张涉及______的增长曲线图，许多人______，然而其他人倾向于___ Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to ______________. 4、目前，共同之处是_________，许多人喜欢______因为_______除此之外还由于_____ Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like______________ because ______________. Besides, ______________. 5、（图表所示）_____，就像许多其他事物，被____更加喜爱，然而这一观点正被________所抨击，一些人认为_________，他们指出___________ ______________， just like many other things, are preferred by ____________. While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that ______________. 1 according to the chart``` 2 the date lead us to the conclusion that``` 3 the date show``` 4 the tree diagram reveals how``` 5 the figures show``` 6 this is a cure graph which describes the trend of``` 7 the pie graph depicts``` 8 the graph provides some interesting date regrarding``` 9 the table shows the changes in the number of ``` over the period from ```to ``` 10 as is shown in the table ``` 11 from the table ,we can clearly see that ``` 12 this table shows the changing proportion of X and Y from ``` to ```` 13 the graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in``` 14 as can be seen from the grape ,the two curves show the flutuation of ``` 15 over the period from ```to ```the```remained level. 16 in the year between ```and ```. 17 in the 3 years spanning from 2005 through 2008. 18 the number of ``` remained steady from ```to ````. 19 the number sharply went up to ``` 20 the percentage of ``` stayed the same between ``` and ``` 21 the percentage remainede steady at``` 22 the percentage of ```is sightly large than that of. 23 there is not a great deal of differece between ```and ``` 24 the graphs show a three fold increase in the number of ``` 25 ```decreased year by year while ```increased steadily. 26 there is an upward trend in the number of ``` 27 a considerable increase occurred from ```to ``` 28 from ```to ```the rate of decrease slow down. 29 from this year on,there was a gradual declinel reduction in the ```reaching a figure of. 30 be similar to ```be the same as 31 there are a lot similarities between ```and ``` 32 the difference between X and Y lies in ``` 雅思学术性写作考试中Task 1 考查考生解释，说明信息的能力，这些信息通常体现在图解，表格和插图中，这一部分的模式化程度更高一些。下类50个句式是雅思留学类考生需要背诵的最最基础的句子。

请同学们自己背诵。在写作小作文的时候，也可以作为参考材料。

1. the table illustrates the changes in the number of。over the period from。

to。 该表格描述了在。

年之。年间。

数量的变化。 2. the bar chart illustrates that。

该柱状图展示了。 3. the graph provides some interesting data regarding。

该图为我们提供了有关。有趣数据。

4. the diagram shows (that)。 该图向我们展示了。

5. the pie graph depicts (that)。. 该圆形图揭示了。

6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of。 这个曲线图描述了。

的趋势。 7. the figures/statistics show (that)。

数据（字）表明。 8. the tree diagram reveals how。

该树型图向我们揭示了如何。 9. the data/statistics show (that)。

该数据（字）可以这样理解。 10. the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that。

这些数据资料令我们得出结论。 11. as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table。

如图所示。 12. according to the chart/figures。

根据这些表（数字）。 13. as is shown in the table。

如表格所示。 14. as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in。

从图中可以看出，。发生了巨大变化。

15. from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that。or it is clear/apparent from the chart that。

从图表我们可以很清楚（明显）看到。 16. this is a graph which illustrates。

这个图表向我们展示了。 17. this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from。

to。 该表格描述了。

年到。年间a与b的比例关系。

18. the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in。 该图以圆形图形式描述了。

总的趋势。 19. this is a column chart showing。

这是个柱型图，描述了。 20. as can be seen from the graph, the two curves 。

22考雅思啦,大作文第一次写,求打分,谢谢大家！！！

382字……你考试时确定40分钟能写得完么（小作文20分钟也可能会拖点时间），而且纸可能也不太够写

另外拼写也挺多错误的？是打错了还是拼错了？用word的自动更正自己看看，如worring、facilitis、changce、oberservation、healty等等

information不可数，不能加s

整体上感觉用了模板，十天的？不过这种套用可能也没问题吧，应该不是很严重

我也22号考，不是第一次，水平不高，只能给你这些小建议了

雅思作文（范文/模板）

雅思小作文写作万能模板 1、通过第一个曲线图，我们可以知道____，也说明了结果是___ According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________. 2、一张有趣、有教育意义的、（内容）的图片（这句模板在雅思小作文中的应用非常的广泛。）

There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: __________. 3、当前有一张涉及______的增长曲线图，许多人______，然而其他人倾向于___ Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to ______________. 4、目前，共同之处是_________，许多人喜欢______因为_______除此之外还由于_____ Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like______________ because ______________. Besides, ______________. 5、（图表所示）_____，就像许多其他事物，被____更加喜爱，然而这一观点正被________所抨击，一些人认为_________，他们指出___________ ______________， just like many other things, are preferred by ____________. While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that ______________. 1 according to the chart``` 2 the date lead us to the conclusion that``` 3 the date show``` 4 the tree diagram reveals how``` 5 the figures show``` 6 this is a cure graph which describes the trend of``` 7 the pie graph depicts``` 8 the graph provides some interesting date regrarding``` 9 the table shows the changes in the number of ``` over the period from ```to ``` 10 as is shown in the table ``` 11 from the table ,we can clearly see that ``` 12 this table shows the changing proportion of X and Y from ``` to ```` 13 the graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in``` 14 as can be seen from the grape ,the two curves show the flutuation of ``` 15 over the period from ```to ```the```remained level. 16 in the year between ```and ```. 17 in the 3 years spanning from 2005 through 2008. 18 the number of ``` remained steady from ```to ````. 19 the number sharply went up to ``` 20 the percentage of ``` stayed the same between ``` and ``` 21 the percentage remainede steady at``` 22 the percentage of ```is sightly large than that of. 23 there is not a great deal of differece between ```and ``` 24 the graphs show a three fold increase in the number of ``` 25 ```decreased year by year while ```increased steadily. 26 there is an upward trend in the number of ``` 27 a considerable increase occurred from ```to ``` 28 from ```to ```the rate of decrease slow down. 29 from this year on,there was a gradual declinel reduction in the ```reaching a figure of. 30 be similar to ```be the same as 31 there are a lot similarities between ```and ``` 32 the difference between X and Y lies in ``` 雅思学术性写作考试中Task 1 考查考生解释，说明信息的能力，这些信息通常体现在图解，表格和插图中，这一部分的模式化程度更高一些。下类50个句式是雅思留学类考生需要背诵的最最基础的句子。

请同学们自己背诵。在写作小作文的时候，也可以作为参考材料。

1. the table illustrates the changes in the number of。over the period from。

to。 该表格描述了在。

年之。年间。

数量的变化。 2. the bar chart illustrates that。

该柱状图展示了。 3. the graph provides some interesting data regarding。

该图为我们提供了有关。有趣数据。

4. the diagram shows (that)。 该图向我们展示了。

5. the pie graph depicts (that)。. 该圆形图揭示了。

6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of。 这个曲线图描述了。

的趋势。 7. the figures/statistics show (that)。

数据（字）表明。 8. the tree diagram reveals how。

该树型图向我们揭示了如何。 9. the data/statistics show (that)。

该数据（字）可以这样理解。 10. the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that。

这些数据资料令我们得出结论。 11. as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table。

如图所示。 12. according to the chart/figures。

根据这些表（数字）。 13. as is shown in the table。

如表格所示。 14. as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in。

从图中可以看出，。发生了巨大变化。

15. from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that。or it is clear/apparent from the chart that。

从图表我们可以很清楚（明显）看到。 16. this is a graph which illustrates。

这个图表向我们展示了。 17. this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from。

to。 该表格描述了。

年到。年间a与b的比例关系。

18. the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in。 该图以圆形图形式描述了。

总的趋势。 19. this is a column chart showing。

这是个柱型图，描述了。 20. as can be 。