高三英语作文批改作文要求是描述事迹和你的看法

without hesitation she gave a hand regardless of potential danges(dangers).nevertheless,occupied in comforting the lady,she was knocked by a car,which caused a sharp pain and left fracture on her leg.after that she wasn't regretful,maintaining it was life that counted.personally,i think highly of her heroic acts.there' on (no) denying that but for her help,the lady would have got into bigger trouble.it is horrible to imagine passengers leaving the injuered ( injured) alone,(+and) having no sympathy.i think it of greet (great)significance to help the lady immediately at the moment,which brings hope as well as love back to society.i firmly believe only when everyone attaches great importance to helping people in need can we get rid of coldness and live in harmony！很好的作文啊！。

初中英语作文（帮忙批改一下）初中英语作文（帮忙批改一下,最好

Winter holiday is approaching. What am I going to do?I want to go to Beijing which I have never been to.As living in the south, I seldom saw snow before. So I want to go to Beijing especially for the snow. And I also want to feel the different winter. Beijing is the capital city of China with lots of places of interests, Such a s forbidden city and the great wall. I am imagining how these place would look like in winter and they must be a great scene. So I want to go to Beijing in winter vacation.Hope to have completely holidays.。

【请帮我批改一下这篇英语作文：Mylifestyle请帮我批改一下这篇英语

My lifestyleMy lifestyle is (very healthy).I get up at 6 o'clock in the morning(,) then I (do some exercising).I exercise every day because that is good for my health.(I have a regulated eating habit,because I like eating vegetables and fruits.I have vegetables in my meals every day and eat fruits) three or four times a week.Vegetables and fruits are good for my health therefore I try (to eat them as much as possible).I sleep 8 hours (everyday so i have enough energy to study and play.) I believe my healthy lifestyle can help me to study better.。

【英语作文批改

【As is clearly shown by the cartoon】（加上这个可能好点），it goes without saying that the cartoon aims at revealing a common (and seriou)（去掉括号里面） pheonmenon in our society : with the rapid development of internet,(We choose it as the only tool to communicate with others)唯一的交流工具，不符合现实，应该改为 the essential tool 或者the popular tool可以改为：The inrernet has become essencial to our life,We choose it as the popular tool to communicate with others and don't want to do the same thing (in the reality) . (in the reality) 应该为 in real life Therefore ,We live much closer than anytime before yet the distance(inside of )改为（ between） us (become) further( long )改为 （longer）than anytime before too.。

求批改英语作文,满分10分,求分数求评语

第一段 because前不需加标点 把大写变小写

第二段 we were went把were去掉 隔行and i good at 加上am

we not only swiming or enjoy hot spring,we can eat something and drink something变成swim 然后spring后面加上butalso

不是on the noon 是at noon

是eat rice 不是rich

go swimming前面是and

其他差不多

打分的话6分。

英语作文批改

修改后：Having a baby can change your life which can be positive or negative. It has a positive effect on you as it enables you to become more responsible, brings you more happiness and enhances the relationship between husband and wife. When the baby speaks for the first time and calls you“father” or “mother”, you will be joyful and excited. When the baby walks for the first time, you feel extremely happy. As the child grows and maturers day by day , you can feel more and more happiness and excitement. The baby is an extension of the parents'life and the prove of their love. However, it can have negative effects such as sleep deprivation, change of purpose in live that you no longer live solely for yourself and all the hard works of looking after a baby. The most siginificant effect is sleep deprivation due to baby's irregular sleeping pattern. We often hear babies cry at night. The baby might be feeling hungry, parents need to get up to feed him/her. Consequently, parents might have to wake several times at night care for their children. Also, when you have a baby, your life changes and you no longer live for yourself. You can no longer go see a film, go shopping or go to a party whenever you want to, because you have a baby to care for. Futhermore, I think that when you have a baby, you need to work hard to earn more money as it is a huge cost to care for a baby, such as education cost, toys, clothing,etc. Your life will be changed when you have a baby, it has some benefits, but also carries potential risks. The benefits are giving you satisfaction and enhance parents' relationships. However, there are some risks, such as sleep deprivation, the fact that you no longer live for yourself and the need to work harder.希望对你有帮助~天上~注：作文中重复的地方都删去了.如果不能引出什么新的内容来，用第一，第二，第三格式说着一样的话，只会让文章看起来累赘.。

批改作文,这篇文章根据英文写作的要求来说,有哪些需要改进？

1.Admittedly,the competitions in the campus are fierce enough,which have rendered the students 2.But they should also be aware of the fact that they have to face more。

3.Without such experiences in university,the students will feel it more difficult to integrate into society.4.As a matter of fact,competitions exist objectively everywhere5.and it is through competition that students can be admitted to the best university to receive higher education.。