求一篇托福范文

这是戴云教主修改的一篇范文，希望对你有帮助！People should not pay for the public transportation. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons or examples or support your ideas. There are all kinds (of ways 去掉) of public transportation all over the world, which play (the) (an)important role in people's daily lives. Although nearly （这里用almost或者nearly都可以， 共同点1：两者均可表示“几乎”、“差不多”，有时可换用：但有时almost比nearly表示更接近的程度，用于 any 以及 no, none, nobody, nothing, never 等否定词前，可用almost，但不能用 nearly, nearly 前可用 very, pretty, not 等词修饰，但 almost 之前不能用这些词：）everybody in different countries needs to use the public transportation, people's attitudes towards it are entirely different. Some people insist that people should pay nothing for their using (usage) of the public transportation. (pay nothing = free of charge) Meanwhile, those who are strongly opposed to it （这个用法你使用的很好， be opposed to something） cite that people should pay for it if they want to take the advantage of the convenience （有take the convenience of something 的用法么？我没有找到，你如果有这方面的例子，可以告诉我） of the public transportation. From my own perspective, the latter one is more favorable even though I myself am one of the persons who need to spend money when take the public transportation. The first reason I want to put forward to support the cause of paying (cause 一般指不好的事情，比如说事故的起因，在这里用有点不合适，这一句话这么说是可以的，但是有点绕，可以直接说 The first reason I use to support my statement) is that any government needs enough money to build up and perfect infrastructures including the public transportation which are of great benefit to the entire people in one country. And where do governments get the money for constructions? People who have some basic common sense should know that it is (from) the pockets of all the citizens where governments get money. Here someone who opposes to （这里用be opposed to doing/something 或者是 oppose something/doing sthing， 但是没有oppose to do something这个用法的） pay money will probably jump out to claim that now that governments levy taxes they should not ask people for money when they use the public transportation. I will give my point view （观点是point of view）which is directed against this statement. My opinion is that to build up perfect public transportation nets involving subways,buses and any other traffic transportations or auxiliary installations needs huge public tax subsidies. If all the people use the public transportation for free, it will mean that governments will spend much more money to support the operation of the public transportation. Maybe there won't be enough money to carry on new constructions. The financial burden of governments resulting from free public transportation might vastly increase and reach the point where they （这里指代有点不明）cannot stand. If we also think over the large amount of fuels used by traffic transportations and the salaries paid to staffs who work to operate the public transportations, I think everyone can reach the conclusion that if one country isn't so rich that all the people can enjoy high welfare in every area of daily lives（是否可以表达成 if one country is not rich enough to guaranty that all the citizens are covered with the high welfare in every aspects of their daily lives）, maybe it's unavoidable to pay when using the public transportation (the payment for using the public transportation is almost unavoidable). 你可以看一下那个表达方式更好Another important reason (which) cannot be ignored is that the number of passengers will undoubtedly increase rapidly just like traveling by skyrocket （这里可以说 will undoubtedly be skyrocket/skyrocketing就可以表达你想说的意思了）in case of the totally free public transportation. As we know, public transportation plays an irreplaceable role in people's daily social life. Particularly in some metropolis like New York, London and Beijing, there is an amazing flow volume of passenger using public transportation everyday. Just imagine the rapidly growing population taking public transportation instead of private vehicles or walking in case that the tickets are free. And the traffic system is likely to be disordered. Can you imagine the picture that hundreds of thousands of people crowd (are crowding， 因为你的picture描述的是一个进行中的状态，所以用进行时更好，而且要注意并列成分的关系) in subways, or hectometers of long lines in airports are waiting for check in? Beijing' subways can be。

请帮忙分析下关于我3次托福的作文问题？

009 Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.FriendsPublic facility studyPart time job If I have chance to choose where I live, I prefer to live in a big city. Even if I know it has different advantages of them, but I have more opportunities to see distinct thing such as friends, facilities and know more about our cruel society when I live in a city. As I know, access to public facilities is an odds to enhance and enjoy our study. As a student, the first important job of us is always study, so it plays an important role that we choose a proper environment to study like research, doing homework. There are a lot of huge libraries, park around us. We can read all kinds of books to do our research, homework. Access to immense libraries is really hard for those who are far away from the city. After studying hard, we can have a walk on the park to enjoy the attractive scenery. Sometimes, we can take advantage of the facilities of park, like playing basketball. It definitely helps us to relax and relieve the pressure from the work and study. Moreover, we can make more friends in the big city. There is no doubt that the city amasses different kind of people, so we have more chance to communicate with them. For example, when I transfer another school to New York city, I actually have more opportunities to chat with many people such as Indian, French. And now, I join in a group on internet and I often meet them at central park once a week, we talk about the culture, customs, foods and privacy. I learn a great deal of new thing that I don't know before. The last but the least, it is for me to find a part-time job in the city. Living in a city offers many jobs for us. There is no exaggerating that we can accumulate our experience during the vacation, it is important for the people who want to pursue the better future.这篇是几个月前备考的作文日志，那时候作文没有怎么准备，结构不怎么好。

托福写作范文：成功需要什么条件

托福独立写作题目： What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.一个人成功需要具备什么样的技术水平？ [托福独立写作范文一] Upon the question that what is the very important skill a person should learn in the world today, different people have differnt opinions. In my point of view, I perfer to think that communication is the most impotant skill for almost every person. There are many reasons to support my view. Firstly, communication is a bridge between people. Nobody is omnipotent; people depend on one another in their daily lives. We all hope we can be become the person who masters every skills and can complete every kind work by ourselves. However the real world tells us that this just is a dream. Therefore, people are interdependant, no can can say that he does not need other people's help. The society requires cooperation among people. Communication is the link. Communication is the first step of successful cooperation among people. By communication, we exchange of thoughts and information, and get other people understand our needs and ideas. For example, in a company, big or small, a manager always has to communicate with his boss, coleagues and subordinates. Secondly, communication can help us keep friendship and make new friends. Friends need to communicate to each other, so that they know each other's needs and feelings. Indeed, the most important qualities of a friend is communication and understanding. If you are a good communicator, it is very easy for you to keep your friendship and make new friends. If you do not communicate with your friends, you will not only feel lonely, but also can eventually loss your friends. From all above, I think that communacation is the most important skill for people to survive in this society. I hope everybody works hard to get the skill. [托福独立写作范文二] Nowadays people say that we have stepped into "The Information Age", therefore computer skills are one of the most important skills in today's society. Being able to operate a computer is an advanced technique and can increase one's work efficiency and simplify many works. Using a computer can help people do many complex works. You can calculate a very complex arithmetic problem. Many arithmetic problems in engineering are too complex to work out by hands. A computer can do these works conveniently and easily. You can also look for some references from a foreign country from a computer if you login in the Internet. You can save your documents in some discs on a computer no matter how large they are and you do not need to take a lot of paper. Using a computer can increase your work efficiency. With its help, you can book plane tickets and hotel rooms for a business trip. You can easily compile your files in a shorter time and retrive them whenever you need. If you are an engineer, you can control machines automatically with the help of a computer. The products are more precise than those controlled by hands and the product efficiency is higher. You can save a lot of time to consider other things and this is important for your success. If you can operate a computer, you can sit down in your own home and control distant work. All you need to do is pressing some keys. With the help of a computer, your work can be simplified. You also can use a computer to communicate with your friends by e-mails and it is quicker and safer than ordinary means. There are many other skills a person should learn to be successful, but I think that being able to operating a computer is the most important. [托福独立写作范文三] With the development of science and technology, the world is no longer what it used to be. Everyone should master one or more skills in order to survive and succeed in the world. As far as I am concerned, the most important skill one should learn is to teach himself or herself. To begin with, no one can depend on a teacher in the whole life. In high school and university, several teachers can tcach you physics, chemistry, biology and so on. But when you find a job and leave school, few people will tell you how to solve the problem you encounter in the job. What you can do is to read books and find the answers yourself. If you do not have the ability to teach yourself, it is difficult to survive in the world. In addition, what we have learned in the school is probably not enough. Nowadays new science and technology develop very rapidly. Suppose you are majored in computer. As we all know, the computer。

求解托福110以上的大神们,托福口语怎么练才能练到26呢？背范文真

托福要达到110+的分数，感觉似乎是无法企及的高度。

确实达到110+是非常不容易的，而且也不是“快速”就能达到的。所谓的考试技巧，不过是应对考试的辅助工具，并不是主要的复习内容。

另外，一味追求考试技巧，追求“速成”，无非只是懒惰的借口。比如阅读：一味追求阅读技巧，希望短期内阅读分数突飞猛进，无非只是不愿意日夜背诵单词的借口。

试想下，就算知道，阅读时应该根据不同的题型采用不同的阅读技巧，根据不同的逻辑信号词，定位作者的态度或观点，但如果一句句子10个单词5个都不认识的话，还怎么可能答对题目呢？所以，110+绝不是可以速成的分数，而是需要长期积累才能取得的。当然，如果考生本身英语基础不错，本身就处于100左右的分数段，那么110+的分数确实只是考试技巧，运气，以及考试当日自身情况的问题了。

关于考试技巧，按照听力，阅读，写作，口语，每一部分的考试技巧我都已经写了详细的介绍，附上链接供大家参考。如何提高托福口语？提供链接 from Q 6：如何提高托福口语如何提高托福听力？提供链接 from Q 8：托福考试听力复习策略如何提高托福阅读？提供链接 from Q 7：托福阅读怎样提高如何提高托福写作？提供链接 from Q 2：托福写作怎么提高？这里我就详细的讲一下如何冲刺110+的日常备考方式，同时分享一些个人的经验。

不喜勿喷。若觉得我介绍的方法还挺有效的，也请大家分享或点赞，造福广大有着高分梦想的考生。

1. 口语部分。不要偷懒，请刷TPO，刷机经，刷刷刷！每天不间断，直到考试前为止。

关于口语的提高方法，答题技巧，答题模板在链接中我已经详细说明了，这里我就不浪费笔墨了。这里要谈的是，如何利用平日里的碎片时间有效的提高口语水平。

口语这个东西不像词汇和语法，不是单纯靠记忆储备就能有所突破的。口语不仅要有语言知识的储备，同时还要有所谓的语感，也就是对语言的熟悉度。

通过不断地说，不断地练习，将记忆中沉睡的被动词汇，被动句型，有意识的转换为主动词汇，主动句型，即在平日里说的时候能够自如运用的知识。那要说些什么内容呢？拿TPO的口语题和机经来练习。

2. 阅读部分。同样。

关于阅读的阅读技巧，题目类型，答题技巧在阅读链接中也已经有了详细的说明。在这里，重点讲解平日里阅读能力的积累。

一定要进行大量的课外阅读啊。经济学人什么的，就快点看起来吧，不要偷懒了。

静力学人的句子非常复杂，特别适合长难句练习哦。如果当你经济学人的文章理解都无障碍了的话，托福阅读简直就不成问题了。

另外，虽然我很不愿意说这一点，但是各类名著还是要阅读的。一个月至少一本不可以松懈。

一本书的阅读超过四个星期，也就基本之前的内容都往里，阅读的效果大打折扣。我是不建议考生去读那些popular fiction的。

首先句子基本都是短句，几乎没有复杂的句子结构，不是很适合用于提高阅读能力，甚至是写作能力。名著相对来说用词用句都是比较偏文学的，比较适合托福academic 的基本性质。

推荐几本适宜阅读的名著。ATale of Two Cities, Animal Farm, 1984,Lady Chatterley's Lover, Never Let Me Go,Remains of the Day, Wuthering Heights等。

阅读的时候，一定要记得摘录单词，做一本单词本。不是所有遇到的生词都要记录。

而是当你在阅读过程中反复遇到某一个生词时，查字典并记录在单词本上，以供复习。每天都要复习单词本上的内容！！否则记录了也是浪费力气。

长时间不复习，这些单词很快就会变得陌生。到时候再想起来去背，就跟背词汇手册没什么区别了，你对这些单词已经没有任何记忆了。

3. 听力部分。听力部分除了多听，几乎就没有什么别的方法了。

听力部分的题型和答题技巧都在链接中。然后相关的练习方法，比如shadowing, retelling都在提高听力的链接中解释过了。

在这里附上一些参考书，以及一些可搜集到的资源，希望考生们能够好好的准备。参考资料及书籍： 张艳---《听出托福好英文》 邱政政---《TOEFL听力新思维》 赵丽---《新托福听力红宝书（限量版）》 新东方---《新托福考试听力特训》4. 写作部分写作部分，各位已经猜到了吧，我肯定要说，一定要多写了，详细托福写作技巧请见链接。

但事实上，在多写之前，还有一个步骤要做，就是多阅读。那跟上面阅读部分的准备有什么区别呢。

就是，读完要立刻写。既不是写读后感，也不是写summary，而是在读完一篇短文后，用新学到的句型和词汇造句。

这一步是非常重要的。如果只看不写，看的东西很快就会忘记。

所谓好记性不如烂笔头就是这个道理。能够用新的句型造句，且灵活运用表达不同的意思，才算真正掌握了单词和句型。

最后推荐几本托福写作书，各位同学不要放弃治疗，每天至少写一篇。That's all. Thank you.托福写作资料推荐： 李宁---《新托福高级写作教程》 戴云 / 刘芸---《托福高分范文大全》 常远---《新托福写作真经》 范亚飞---《托福写作白皮书》托福词汇书籍：1. 俞敏洪---《TOEFL词汇词根+联想记忆法》2. 王玉梅---《TOEFL词汇》3. 张红岩---《词以类记——TOEFL.ibt词汇》和《TOEFL词汇10000》4. 李笑来---《TOEFL核。

托福写作步入困境,请高人指路！！！！（答案好了会追加悬赏！！！

我觉得不要背范文，因为范文毕竟太多太杂，就算同一个话题也会有无数篇文章，既浪费时间又浪费脑细胞。

最好的方法是形成自己的风格。我当时准备托福作文和准备SAT作文采用同样的方法，把题库里所有题目划分成几个种类：A)Education--Parents and growing-up--Study--FriendsB)Society:--Technology and progress--Construction--Success--Ethics--Celebrity--Environment--Decision and corporation--HistoryC)Daily life--Reasons--Supposition--Media--Living style--Money allocation--Games, Traveling, Customs这些原本是新东方分的类，你也可以自己划分，有些题可能属于不止一类。

你也可以按照Preference/Opinion/Explanation划分。分好类就该想观点，一个题目至少三个正面观点，如果不行就两正一负，正观点相对来说比较有说服力。

观点想好就准备例子，如果不想写例子可以用议论文的方式阐述（方法太多，在这儿说不清，但是有一整套系统）观点和例子重复几率是非常大的，如果你水平比较高，同样的观点可以用来回答很多题。最后，组装！Introduction（引用，三个why开头，倒装……太多太多，任何自己喜欢的模板都行，只要能写熟练）BODY 1: Topic Sentence （普通TS，比喻……） Reason（这个更多了） Example/Explanation Summary（虚拟语气+倒装，反问……）BODY 2：（同上）BODY 3Conclusion楼主，不能被括号里的东西限制，你平常看到的所有好句子好语法都能用上。

举个例子：要不要做part-time job?1.Experience --Horizon （让步；one hand。the other；虚拟）2.Friends （因果；分类；so。

that）3.Opportunity （无reason；实例；Analyze-->虚拟语气；it is。that）这只是我brainstorm时候的一个小例子，括号里是（Reason;Example;Summary），只是三个Body段的构思，没有包括开头和结尾段。

显然这种方法对于SAT那些题目效果比较好，因为托福题目太杂，什么都涉及，所以这可能要花费一点时间。你可以用这个方法把真题都过一遍，然后针对出现频率比较高的观点写好Body段。

开头结尾一定要提前准备好，因为它们变化比较少，到时候一边打字一边想Body不容易时间不够。我考托福SAT的感想太多，总觉得没有能力把所有东西都说出来。

如果楼主想要写在括号里的那些方法，给我发消息吧，这两天有时间。

戴云的2-1格式

这是戴云教主对一篇2-1的修改，希望对你有帮助Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 审题：1、观点选择类，同意哪个观点并给出理由和例证。

2、题目特点：含有绝对性的词语never，因此态度是不同意该观点。3、段落结构：2-1提纲1、（很多人认为要集思广益）但本人不同意。

2、主体部分（此部分可以多采取对比论证的方式）（1）很多时候需要一个人独自做出决定。在情况紧急的时候（比如遇到灾难、突发事故等等，此处当举例以细节说明）；在日常生活中有很多事情根本不需要讨论决定（即便它很重要），个人简单思考之后决定即可，否则会及其没有效率（此处也可以举例说明）。

（2）需要集思广益的原因是个人智力总是有限的。但是即便是一个人独自做出的决定也不一定就是错误的。

原因：根据生活中积累的经验可以快速做出决定。有时候本能也是决定的正确依据。

（3）不可否认在很多情况下人们应当在广泛听取意见之后再做决定（可以举国家大事为例），这样可以让决定更加的理性，这甚至也是现代社会民主制度的要求。（对方观点的合理性）3、结论：虽然两方各有优势，但是绝不能够说人们在任何情况下都绝对不应该独自做出决定，这种观点太过于绝对，因此我的观点是。

Many people hold the opinion that before one person makes an important decision, he or she should draw on collective wisdom and absorb all useful ideas to make the decision more rational. However, there is the opposite voice saying that people can make one important decision depending on his or her own judgments. From my own perspective, I can hardly give my approval for the former point view. I think that although we need advice and opinions from a mass of persons, it is not to say that it's impossible for some to make big decisions himself in any case. The first reason I want to put forward is that, in many occasions it's indispensable for people to make up their minds without others' ideas. Life abounds with such examples. One of the best typical instances is that if you suffered from some nature (natural) disasters, or some accidents, you would determine how to get rid of the crisis as quickly as possible even though nobody could give you useful advice at the right moment. For example, just imagine that you ran （这里不需要再用虚拟语气了，你可以直接说 imagine that you run） into one devastating tsunami which would happen once in a century when you were wandering （同理用are wandering） at a coastal beach in a certain seaside city to enjoy the beautiful sunshine, would you take out your mobile phone to ask for advice from your relatives one by one or just run away to the nearest elevation immediately? I think the answer is definitely the latter one. At a critical moment like this, it is out of question that people will have no time to have a discussion to determine which way is the best. Besides the emergencies like (like 是介词，不能后面接从句，应该加上what，变成 like what I talk about above)I talk about above, people will always face some conditions that even the issues are very important and people should be wise enough to determine， （你这儿用逗号，两句话之间明显缺乏连接呀，到底是什么关系呢？语义不明，你这个长句子在逻辑上有很大的问题） there is no need to collect ideas from a group because that will lead to a waste of time and vigor （很少用到waste of vigor吧，我觉得用应该用waste of energy，欢迎与我探讨）. Measure the cost of collecting wisdom and think about the efficiency （我觉得这里用祈使句不是很好， 可以换用别的说法，比如说条件状语从句，或者你直接用动名词做状语也可以，主要因为我们的位置是等待老师评判的考生嘛，所以有点读者意识是好的，如果你坚持自己说话的方式我也支持：-）） so it's obvious that sometimes to make an important decision alone may be a better choice. When you were asking your classmates which dining hall you should go for lunch this afternoon, all the dishes would be sold out so that you would have nothing to eat. （呵呵，你忽然冒出这么一句，真是另我感到错手不及呀，你这一句到底想表达一个什么意思来支持你的论点呢？其实可以展开写一下把你的例子说清楚，或者干脆不要。）The second reason to prove the necessity of making decisions alone is that, although one person's ability is limited so people often have to put (their) heads together so as to （你前面已经有了一个so了，这边用 in order to 就显得通顺多了） get better results, it's uncertain that the determinations made all alone will always (be) wrong. （我 个人认为这个句子的逻辑是有问题的， 我们可以把他翻译。

复习托福考试有段时间了,作文不知道怎么去练习写,有好点的范文吗？

一，作文一定要写，这太容易偷懒，我也是老找借口不写，最后只写了8篇，这肯定是扣两分的原因，工夫不到啊。二 戴云教主给的句子一定要用，且用出自己的风格，不要用的太死，我基本都经过自己的改装，而且每个类别的句子我都用了，这要通过自己写很多才能知道如何活用，最后我的模板能达到200多字吧，但是我想只有自己才能知道怎么用，这就叫个性模板拉，用它不用担心，分数可以证明啊。

小作文：这个先不用刻意练，考前提前一个月开始练就行，完全按照教主指示做，写出模板，听力听出三个点，应该就没问题了。我的模板形式：

第一段： 听力讲的主题，which is 不同于阅读

第二段 听力第一个点，转折，阅读第一个点。末尾强调这是阅读和听力第一个不同的地方

第三段和第四段形式重复第二段就可以了

转折词和末尾强调句可以找戴云讲义上，那里给的足够了。

总之，作文也推荐去TPO小站看看，不听的话像我们这些基础差的根本没法下手。