2014.2.22雅思范文
谁有2019年2月14日雅思大作文真题参考范文
2019年2月14日雅思大作文题目新技术改变了孩子们的玩耍方式,这是好还是坏?New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?解析&审题本题中有三个关键词,即new technologies,children,spend their free time,要求讨论“新技术改变了孩子们玩耍的方式,这是好还是坏?”在构思本题的时候,我们首先需要说清楚的是:哪些新技术?怎么样改变了孩子们玩耍的方式?然后讨论这种改变是好还是坏。
当然,我们也要提醒自己,本题的重点是讨论“这种改变是好还是坏?”说到“新技术”,我们立马会想到电脑,网络,智能手机。雅思考试写作经常要求考生讨论这样的题目“有了新技术,人们是否还需要去博物馆,去上学,去图书馆,去公司上班”,这是要求考生讨论新技术给人们的学习和生活带来的影响。
本题其实与这些题目是异曲同工的:有了新技术,孩子们怎么玩耍?那么,新技术如何改变孩子们玩耍的方式呢?我们需要提炼出2-3个“玩耍新方式”,在接下来重点讨论起优劣势的时候才能有基础。这里其实涉及到一个比较的问题。
没有新技术的时候,孩子们一般喜欢在一起做各种游戏,或者安静地阅读,而网络手机的广泛使用,则让孩子们整天独自打电子游戏,或者浏览各种社交媒体信息。于是,我们可以归纳出新技术给孩子玩耍方式造成的两个影响:(1)从真实的集体游戏转变为虚拟的网上游戏;(2)从阅读书籍到紧盯手机或电脑。
这样,我们接下来的讨论就相对容易了。我们可以讨论这种变化的消极影响:首先,紧盯手机和电脑会给孩子的身体带来不良影响(数据表明,中小学生近视的比例已经达到惊人的70%),其次,过多沉浸在虚拟世界容易让孩子们产生孤独感,失去解决真实世界中各种问题的能力(比如人际交往能力,领导能力等)。
这样写,大家是否觉得思路是很清晰的?接下来,请大家阅读唐老师的高分范文,看以上思路是如何具体反映到字里行间的。老师笔记01The widespread use of new technologies such as the Internet,computers,and smart phones has fundamentally changed the way children spend their free time.In the past,most children wouldengage in outdoor activities such as hiking,playing hide-and-seek,flying kites,to name only a few.Those who enjoyed reading for pleasure would stay indoors and read print books such as classical novels,childrens stories,and comic books.The situation is quite different now.The great majority of children today spend their spare time online,playing video games,listening to music,and browsing around in the social media of all kinds.In my view,this new development has more downside risks.互联网、电脑和智能手机等新技术的广泛应用,从根本上改变了儿童利用空闲时间的方式。
在过去,大多数儿童都会从事户外活动,如远足,玩捉迷藏,放风筝,等等。那些喜欢读书的人会待在家里,读一些印刷书籍,如经典小说,儿童故事和漫画书。
现在情况完全不同了。今天,绝大多数孩子都把业余时间花在网上,玩电子游戏,听音乐,在各种社交媒体上闲逛。
在我看来,这一新趋势有更多不利的风险。解析(1)本段讨论新技术如何改变了儿童利用空闲时间的方式。
本段采用的是比较法:过去。
,而现在。
。(2)widespread广泛的(3)fundamentally从根本上地(4)engage in从事(5)to name only a few仅举几个例子;诸如此类;等等(6)the great majority of。
绝大多数的。
(7)browse around四处闲看(8)downside risks不利的风险02Though it does make childrens life more interesting,and help them obtain information in a faster and more convenient way,the Internet also makes children easily addicted to it.The violent gun-fighting games,for example,appeal to children so much that some of them will spend hours and hours playing them.The cost is really high.The childrens performance at school becomes worse and worse,and their health also suffers.A recent study indicates that globally,the Internet games are responsible for 70%middle school students who are shortsighted.虽然互联网确实使儿童的生活更有趣,并帮助他们以更快和更方便的方式获取信息,但互联网也使孩子们很容易对它上瘾。比如暴力枪战游戏对孩子们有很大的吸引力,以至于他们中的一些人会几个小时几个小时地玩这些游戏。
这样做的成本真的很高。孩子们在学校的表现越来越差,而且健康也受到损害。
最近的一项研究表明,在全球范围内,网络游戏造成70%的中学生近视。解析(1)本段论述把时间花在网络游戏上的第一种坏处:学习和身体受损。
论述方法包括举例和引用研究数据。(2)be addicted to。
沉迷于。
(3)appeal to。吸引(4)globally全球范围内(5)be responsible for。
为。
负责;导致。
03Worse still,too much time spent facing the computer or smart phone may result in childrens isolation from the actual world.In the traditional games,children could learn 。
雅思作文(范文/模板)
雅思小作文写作万能模板 1、通过第一个曲线图,我们可以知道____,也说明了结果是___ According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________. 2、一张有趣、有教育意义的、(内容)的图片(这句模板在雅思小作文中的应用非常的广泛。)
There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: __________. 3、当前有一张涉及______的增长曲线图,许多人______,然而其他人倾向于___ Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to ______________. 4、目前,共同之处是_________,许多人喜欢______因为_______除此之外还由于_____ Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like______________ because ______________. Besides, ______________. 5、(图表所示)_____,就像许多其他事物,被____更加喜爱,然而这一观点正被________所抨击,一些人认为_________,他们指出___________ ______________, just like many other things, are preferred by ____________. While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that ______________. 1 according to the chart``` 2 the date lead us to the conclusion that``` 3 the date show``` 4 the tree diagram reveals how``` 5 the figures show``` 6 this is a cure graph which describes the trend of``` 7 the pie graph depicts``` 8 the graph provides some interesting date regrarding``` 9 the table shows the changes in the number of ``` over the period from ```to ``` 10 as is shown in the table ``` 11 from the table ,we can clearly see that ``` 12 this table shows the changing proportion of X and Y from ``` to ```` 13 the graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in``` 14 as can be seen from the grape ,the two curves show the flutuation of ``` 15 over the period from ```to ```the```remained level. 16 in the year between ```and ```. 17 in the 3 years spanning from 2005 through 2008. 18 the number of ``` remained steady from ```to ````. 19 the number sharply went up to ``` 20 the percentage of ``` stayed the same between ``` and ``` 21 the percentage remainede steady at``` 22 the percentage of ```is sightly large than that of. 23 there is not a great deal of differece between ```and ``` 24 the graphs show a three fold increase in the number of ``` 25 ```decreased year by year while ```increased steadily. 26 there is an upward trend in the number of ``` 27 a considerable increase occurred from ```to ``` 28 from ```to ```the rate of decrease slow down. 29 from this year on,there was a gradual declinel reduction in the ```reaching a figure of. 30 be similar to ```be the same as 31 there are a lot similarities between ```and ``` 32 the difference between X and Y lies in ``` 雅思学术性写作考试中Task 1 考查考生解释,说明信息的能力,这些信息通常体现在图解,表格和插图中,这一部分的模式化程度更高一些。下类50个句式是雅思留学类考生需要背诵的最最基础的句子。
请同学们自己背诵。在写作小作文的时候,也可以作为参考材料。
1. the table illustrates the changes in the number of。over the period from。
to。 该表格描述了在。
年之。年间。
数量的变化。 2. the bar chart illustrates that。
该柱状图展示了。 3. the graph provides some interesting data regarding。
该图为我们提供了有关。有趣数据。
4. the diagram shows (that)。 该图向我们展示了。
5. the pie graph depicts (that)。. 该圆形图揭示了。
6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of。 这个曲线图描述了。
的趋势。 7. the figures/statistics show (that)。
数据(字)表明。 8. the tree diagram reveals how。
该树型图向我们揭示了如何。 9. the data/statistics show (that)。
该数据(字)可以这样理解。 10. the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that。
这些数据资料令我们得出结论。 11. as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table。
如图所示。 12. according to the chart/figures。
根据这些表(数字)。 13. as is shown in the table。
如表格所示。 14. as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in。
从图中可以看出,。发生了巨大变化。
15. from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that。or it is clear/apparent from the chart that。
从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到。 16. this is a graph which illustrates。
这个图表向我们展示了。 17. this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from。
to。 该表格描述了。
年到。年间a与b的比例关系。
18. the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in。 该图以圆形图形式描述了。
总的趋势。 19. this is a column chart showing。
这是个柱型图,描述了。 20. as can be seen from the graph, the two curves show the。
雅思流程图作文怎么写
很多考生非常害怕看到雅思作文中的流程图题型,一旦作文考到流程图就不能很好的发挥出应有的水平。
但事实上只要把握流程图写作的要领,流程图写作是很容易攻破的。小编为大家整理了雅思流程图写作技巧的内容,并汇总在这篇文章,希望对你们有所帮助~ 雅思流程图作文高分指导细数雅思流程图作文的那些关键要点雅思流程图写作得分三大关键雅思流程图写作必要守则雅思流程图写作架构句型雅思流程图常用被动词语大串烧雅思流程图型写作方法与范文雅思写作:表格流程图透析。
2015年11月03日雅思小作文题目和范文
(源自洛阳大华雅思题库)Some people believe that many people who work for creative arts such as painting, theatre and music should be supported financially by government. Others think that artists in creative arts should be supported by other sources instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.IntroductionVisual and auditory arts play a key role in education and entertainment, making these fields integral aspects of our society among all ages. Nevertheless, there is a controversial division about whether these areas ought to receive, or if they are even deserving of, any public funds.BodyThe arts form an intrinsic part of a country and have an ability to maintain traditional culture, as long as it is prevented from being absorbed by modern or foreign influences. As a result, government should invest funds into these historical types of art in order to educate its citizens and preserve their existence. There are ancient paintings, theatrical arts and musical instruments that ought to be housed and conserved in museums. The destruction of these precious pieces of art could signify a considerable loss of culture, whereby future generations will miss out on them.Artists and their outputs ought to adhere to the economic principles of supply and demand, whereby the necessity for their work is dictated by the need from society. Nevertheless, there are artists, dramatists and musicians who are relatively wealthy and do not require subsides from government to survive. As society evolves, perhaps certain genres of art are not needed anymore and it would be economically unfeasible to keep them afloat using taxpayer dollars. Instead, programs that have immediate impacts on the lives of citizens must be focused on, including education, healthcare and social services.ConclusionFrom my perspective, only art forms that are deemed nationally significant ought to receive government funding. In this way, it would be fair for a host of other industries who cannot easily obtain financial assistance.。
求雅思大作文范文和写作模板
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雅思大作文写作模板:
开头段:两句话
1 转述原文
The issue of increasingly longer life span is of much contention to the general public.
2 提出文章要探讨的内容
Therefore, this essay aims to identify the possible effects that this change has brought to both individuals and society.
中间段:
建议写三段
两种处理方式:第一种先写两点对于个人的影响,再写对于社会的。
第二种先写寿命长对于个人和社会好的影响,再写坏的影响。
结尾段
1 总结文章影响
Therefore, although senior citizens might, to some extent, deprive the younger generation of their job opportunities, they tend to enlighten the whole society with their experience and care.
2 提出建议(主要针对年轻人)
Therefore, the youth are suggested to confront this situation. If they could not be offered the opportunities, it would prove that they were not so capable as the old generation, when the only way out was to learn from old people and try to gain more experiences.
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